This week's assignment had be write a thank you letter to a mentor, teacher, or somebody that helped mold who we are today, I cheated and used 3 people, my three siblings, Melissa, Michael and Ashley.
Hello Mike, Melissa, & Ashley,
Hello Mike, Melissa, & Ashley,
I’m
writing to thank you guys for being my inspiration and molding me into the
person that I am today in more ways than one.
You guys are my siblings each with your own personalities and each with your
little quirks I grew up enjoying. I
appreciate you guys more than you know for all you've done both mentally and physically
for me. I know you guys hate when I get
too mushy, so I’ll try my best to write this letter without too much of that,
no promises.
Mike,
as my big brother you showed me everything I want to be, you’re one of the most
witty people I know, and I try to emanate that every day. You've been my role model my whole life
whether you knew it or not, I’ll always look up to you. Melissa as the oldest sister and most
determined I've learned from you that I can do whatever I set my mind to. You've also made me realize that I need to be
more organized and careful with my money, all your travels you've done, also encouraged
me to want to travel the world. Finally
there’s Ashley, who with her tough love, has taught me that I need to be
tougher, and showed that it’s always important to voice your opinion no matter
how unpopular it may be. She also taught
me that you should be dedicated to your job, as she works longer hours than she
needs to, and is really into her job.
Each
one of you I feel have contributed to a part of the character of who I have
become now as a person. Mike, you gave
me the witty banter I’m known for now and the want to have a good time and make
everybody happy. Melissa, you gave me my
determination and ambition, the want to be something greater, and my want to
explore places I've never been. Ashley,
you've given me toughness and reminding me to always stay dedicated to
something I believe in. I appreciate all
three of you for everything you've done and all your influences you've passed
down to me (including the musical ones).
Love you guys,
Ty
Ty
(Left to Right)Ashley, Me, Melissa, Michael
Ode to the Siblings
At the age of twenty
My siblings molded me
I appreciate what you've done plenty
You are the reason I'm the ambitious teen I appear to be
Melissa you've convinced me to think before spending a penny
Mike you were always there to keep me on track, make sure I get my degree
Ashley you taught me to always be a cognoscenti
I love you guys, that much we must all agree.
(From left to Right) Michael, Ashley, My Dad, Melissa, Me, My Mom
Ty,
ReplyDeleteGreat letter. Very sincere and very well written. It's cool to see how a unit has so much influence (not just one sibling). Very cool. I'm sure they'd appreciate reading that letter.
Your poem is great too... it's a great start. I think that you could spend a little more time on it and expand it. Go crazy. Let it flow.
I'd like to see a poem twice as long (at least), so that you really get to use the language more.
Expand! Let's start to step it up.
GR: 90